That day, I played with my friend ken, and I advance to explore the “ghost’s house”. The “ghost’s house” is the place back from my grandma’s house, only a alley could come to there, very deep in the wood, very darksome, and nobody live in here. Heard of neighbor said the house had even dead a people, and someone had been heard some strange sound from this house, so that people called the house “ghost’s house”. One time, I asked my grandma about this house, my grandma warning me “Don’t close to there! There isn’t cleanly, it’s dangerous.”
But I very interesting at it, so I and ken, decide to explore this house. We went though the alley, carefully to close the house. When we stand front by the house, we feel a little bit cool. Looked at the house, it’s very old and klunky. Broken roof with broken windows, some cirrus cover the entire wall, some sound from the toad came out around here. I bet there must live something, what I don’t know. I tried to look inside at the broken window, but there was too dark to saw anything.
When I was so exciting to looking for something, I heard my grandma yelled me. I afraid she knows I came to here, so I speedily ran back to my grandma’s house. That is the only time I explore the house.
最佳修改 其他小错误还很多,加油!
When I was so exciting 这个是过去进行式。
其他的都已经自行修改