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I'm a shipping from malacca corp.I hope we can work together with pleasure in future,now Our company want delivery some goods to keelung by sea(LCL),the cargo ready date is Apr.28, Could you provide a shipping schedule to us for it, we want to choice the fastest boat. so you are quickly reply is grateful,thank you & let me know if there's any question.
I'm a shipping from malacca corp.I hope we can work together with pleasure in future,now Our company want delivery some goods to keelung by sea(LCL),the cargo ready date is Apr.28, Could you provide a shipping schedule to us for it, we want to choice the fastest boat. so you are quickly reply is grateful,thank you & let me know if there's any question.
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shipping是船舶业，船总数的意思，你想表达的意思是装船通知，所以应该是shippment schedule,也可以是advice of shippment.I'm a shipping 不对，你的意思可能是货运商，可以说transport contractor.
in future最好改为in the future.因为 in future一般有点警告的语气。
want delivery 改为 want to deliver
the cargo ready date is Apr.28改为the date that will be ready for the cargo is Apr.28.
choice是名词，改为choose.
you are quickly reply is grateful有两个谓语了，改为a quick reply is grateful.
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1 疑问句要用问号？Could you provide a shipping schedule to us for it？2The cargo ready date is Apr.28 --> The date of cargo ready is Apr.28.
3 you are quickly reply is grateful ---> your reply quickly is grateful
4 our company 只有一个所以want----> wants,第三人称单数
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