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     As we all know, Changsha is the capital of Hunan Province. It leaves a prosperous, vital and entertainment impression on me before I finally come here. The day I set foot on the ground of Changsha, I felt so disappointed. Tears didn’t fill with my eyes, but my heart. I could hardly believe this was my university that I spent so many years hard working to enter and what annoyed me most is that I have to spend  four complete years here!
I still remember the moment I receive the advice notice of college enrolling, I didn’t know whether I should smile or cry. I gave my teacher a telephone call. She congratulated me on the final result, then she asked where was the CSU. At that time I almost went crazy because everyone seemed to know nothing about my university though it was the most famous university in Hunan province. Once I tried my best to introduce it to everybody who care about me, but it seemed useless. So I finally give it up.
     Where to go? What to do? How can I do? I’m tired of thinking these and I don’t want to know.
     When I was in the park in our campus this morning, I could feel the warm sunshine, seeing the blue sky and green trees, hearing the birds singing. It was beautiful and peaceful, then I can’t help thinking what can I do now?
作品作者:wmy_bee - 小学生 一级
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采纳 1 receive 从remember看出,事情已发生,所以要用过去式 --> received
2foot , 人有俩条腿, ---> feet
回答者:夏日阳光 - 小学生 一级 - 提交时间:2008-5-4 3:14:30

楼层: 69
采纳 I could feel the warm sunshine, seeing the blue sky and green trees, hearing the birds singing
feel   see  hear 这几个动词都应该用一般形式才对吧!
leaves a prosperous, vital and   entertainment impression
prosperous 形容词 vital 名词  entertainment 名词  所以一块用似乎不太妥吧?

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回答者:beark91 - 小学生 一级 - 提交时间:2008-5-8 9:10:55
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