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When we sing the song named " One world One dream " We can feel Chinese feeling
that is so excited.This is the slogan of the Olympic game of 2008 Pekings,this
simple ten words,give me infinite power.
On 13 July 2001,I knew China will hold Olympic game in 2008.Although I was a small girl
at that time,I decided to try my best to support Olympic game.
In fact,I don't like to play sport,because I think it's boring and none of my friends
likes to play sports.But I resolved to play sports for 1 hour every day....
When we sing the song named " One world One dream " We can feel Chinese feeling
that is so excited.This is the slogan of the Olympic game of 2008 Pekings,this
simple ten words,give me infinite power.
On 13 July 2001,I knew China will hold Olympic game in 2008.Although I was a small girl
at that time,I decided to try my best to support Olympic game.
In fact,I don't like to play sport,because I think it's boring and none of my friends
likes to play sports.But I resolved to play sports for 1 hour every day....
补充： One world One dream
When we sing the song named " One world One dream " We can feel Chinese feeling
that is so excited.This is the slogan of the Olympic game of 2008 Pekings,this
simple ten words,give me infinite power.
On 13 July 2001,I knew China will hold Olympic game in 2008.Although I was a small girl
at that time,I decided to try my best to support Olympic game.
In fact,I don't like to play sport,because I think it's boring and none of my friends
likes to play sports.But I resolved to play sports for 1 hour every day.Little by little
I found out that it's fun to play sports.For example,whenI started to paly basketball ,I
can't paly it very well ,but I believed I would do better with my team members' help all
the time.It's one of Olympic spirits,isn't it?
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1 Olympic game 是专有词组要大写第一个字母--〉Olympic Game2在英语中，一般都不用but 作为句子的开头，最后是用--〉However 代替
3 I can't paly it very well 中的can't 要用过去式---〉couldn't
4 but I believed I would do better 没说清做好什么--->but i believeed i would play basketball better
5feel Chinese feeling?? ----> feel the Chinese feeling
6What are the " simple ten words"???
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