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MY FIRST DIARY
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It's a change meeting.When i came to my blog in 4ewriting,i found here,another place where i can improve my english.I am not good at in written english.I hope there were a place people can modify what i write.Now my wish became ture.Hello,everyone.Could you help me?Welcome your advice.Thank you very much.
作品作者:moomm - 小学生 一级
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采纳 1 When i came to my blog in 4ewriting,i found here,another place where i can improve my english.----> when i came to my blog in 4ewriting,i found that here was a place where i could improve my English
2 Now my wish became ture.---> Now i wish it become ture.
回答者:夏日阳光 - 小学生 一级 - 提交时间:2008-5-12 6:13:11
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