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the feeling i feel
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- 阅读次数:when i was young,i wanted to be teacher.In my eyes,to be a teacher was powerful.Now i grow up,i know it more meanful.it stands for responsibility.
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错了．．．1.want 表愿望，渴望，想要等情绪的单词不能用过去时的．．
when i was young,i was eager to be a teacher.
2.in my eyes, 在我眼里，显得比较中国英语，great伟大的比powerful来形容老师更贴切，
in my heart,it is great to be a teacher.
3.meanful，mean后面可加ful的呀，我还不蛮肯定，你是要表达意义远大，那换成下面的ＭＯＲＥ＋名词influence怎样？
now i grow up,i know it more influence. it stands for responsibility.
我来修改：the feeling i feel