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Wrong or Right?
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I am now retiring from my working life.Actually I just came back from Singapore. I am 35 years old and still availble,recently i make a dicision which maybe the most important in my life that i will go aborad to study.However, one of my friends, Jianghua ,has always been my fanatical opponent of my overseas study .Fisrt of all , she pointed out that the cost of oversea study is too high which will expanse all of my money earned in Singapore. Sencondly,she think my age is not suitable to do this kind of things ,but to marry and live a normal life like others.Thirdly, she feel serious worry with my future life in Austrilai if i lose i will get nothing .So what is wrong or right on this matter ? I insist on my opinon that people should chase the life which they really want most ,especilly the life in our dream ,for our lives is so limited that each of us can not catch up with its pace.
作品作者:yusheng - 小学生 一级
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采纳 拼写错误 :  make a dicision  改为 make a decision  
             go aborad  改为 go abroad
which maybe the most important  ??? in my life   此句貌似有问题
worry with 改为worry baout 比较恰当吧


呵呵,同为学英语,改的不当之处多包涵!

回答者:beark91 - 小学生 一级 - 提交时间:2008-5-8 9:01:19
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