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my dear,let me help you!
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I am so sorry to see that you are very exhausted everyday after work,and you often complain to me about the company which you are working for,what's worse,you are always in bad mood,I think all this should be contributed to your heavy work ,so I give you gifts and play jokes just to to take your ease ,I want you happy everyday ,I am so anxious about your situation ,when you told me that once I graduate from BUPT we will leave beijing, my tears fill in my eyes,It is the right moment that I make the decision to spare no effort to study,I will try my best to improve your fame and mine,I wish we will have a happy life in the near future!
I am so sorry to see that you are very exhausted everyday after work,and you often complain to me about the company which you are working for,what's worse,you are always in bad mood,I think all this should be contributed to your heavy work ,so I give you gifts and play jokes just to to take your ease ,I want you happy everyday ,I am so anxious about your situation ,when you told me that once I graduate from BUPT we will leave beijing, my tears fill in my eyes,It is the right moment that I make the decision to spare no effort to study,I will try my best to improve your fame and mine,I wish we will have a happy life in the near future!
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1just to to take ---> just to 2 I graduate from BUPT we will leave beijing---> we will leave Beijing when i graduate from BUPT(什么地方？？）
3 all this---〉all these
4 I want you happy everyday ----> i want you feel happy everyday
5 what's worse--> how worse
我来修改：my dear,let me help you!