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my retirment announcement
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- 阅读次数: If I were Jordon and now I am going to say goodbye to basketball field where I had played for several years,at this important monment I would like to say something like this to my fans and friends .
First I was so glad to have spend these years with you,it would an unforgetful memory for me for ever, I could deeply feel your care on me ,I am so grateful for you all about this! you have witted my growing-up,from a freshman to an allstar player,and our hearts have always tied together by the team .I am enjoying this .Then I should thanks for your support ,especially when I was in trouble no matter in field or in my life ,whenever and wherever,I will be in favor of our team !this is my heartfelt wishes!goodbye basketball and goodbye my dear friends!I will always love you!thank you everyone!
First I was so glad to have spend these years with you,it would an unforgetful memory for me for ever, I could deeply feel your care on me ,I am so grateful for you all about this! you have witted my growing-up,from a freshman to an allstar player,and our hearts have always tied together by the team .I am enjoying this .Then I should thanks for your support ,especially when I was in trouble no matter in field or in my life ,whenever and wherever,I will be in favor of our team !this is my heartfelt wishes!goodbye basketball and goodbye my dear friends!I will always love you!thank you everyone!
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1 If I were Jordon ----> if i am Jordon2 your care on me ----> you care on me
3 when I was in trouble no matter in field or in my life ,---> when i was in troubles wherever i was in field or in my life
4 monment 拼错啦--->moment
5 and our hearts have always tied together by the team ---〉and our hearts have always tied together with the team
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If I were Jordon and now were going to say goodbye to basketball field where I had devoted myself to almost all my lifetime ,at this exciting monment I would like to say something to my fans and friends ." First , I am so glad to have the wonderful time with you,it would be an unforgetful memory for me in my life , and even I could feel your meticulous care on me ,I am so grateful for you all about this that you had witted my growing-up from a freshman to an allstar player.Our hearts have always been tied together by the team which I am enjoying very much .Then I want to thank for your support ,especially when I was in trouble no matter in field or in my life . And therefore ,whenever and wherever,I will be in favor of our team !This is my faithful wishes!G oodbye basketball and goodbye my dear friends!I will always being love you!thank you all !"
第一段虚拟语气 第二段一般现在是 将来时 将来进行时 全篇用虚拟是不可以的 所以第二段我加了引号为发言内容。
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